My daughter is in IV standard and here is a short story written by her about her birth day. When I read this first time I was really amazed to see how she had employed the right element (a twist) that makes short store more interesting.
Here is the story:
My Birth Day at the Seashore
I am Smruthi. On my birthday my family gave me a big surprise. They told me that it is too boring and let us go out to beach; so all of us planned to go in nice dresses. I was a little doubtful so I asked my mom, are we really going to the beach?
‘Yes’, she told. So I took the SandCastle Set and our swim suit. When we went I saw all my friends and cousins. We went in and I saw a cake which I liked. On it was written HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU SMRUTHI.
I thanked my parents for giving me a very good surprise.
And suddenly my father woke me up. At last it was a dream. I wish I had my birthday really like that.
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GREAT TO READ..AMAZING STORY..GOD BLESS
F/O KUSHAAGRA M BIMAL
GOKULDHAM HIGH SCHOOL & JUNIOR COLLEGE
GOREGAON EAST,MUMBAI – 64
very nice
VERY GOOD
Wonderful dreams comes true dear smruthi… All the best
Great stuff.
Dear Smurthi,
So, what did you actually get for your birthday? Did your dream come true…?
Smruthi is definitely talented. And its an eye opener to some of us how all kids dream and in shows their inner desires.. Its a good way of bringing out what your kids feel and want.
Thanks, Smruthi. I will try to manage and give same surprise to my daughter on her coming birthday. Oh! yes, in real not in dream.
Yes Smruthi…you are great.. i wish you for your bright future.
And most of the parents will treat those childrens when there childwood as a god / godess & every parents will pray those kids goodness and make them happy all the way.
all the best for your future
My daughter Hemal is also studying in 4th std. & her b’day planning is also started almost few months back. Lovely age & lovely dreams……
Smruthi…….Continue to write……..Best wishes for your creativity…..
wow.. wonderful one…my best wishes for you.. keep rocking with writing…looking for many more…
really super emotional story
Very well written Smruthi… all the best for your future. wbr,sunil